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Nightshade
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0 posted 2003-11-16 02:16 PM




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Words appear in puffs
Secrets hang in glazed divulge
Northern exposure ~
Love's promise solidified
By November's touch of frost


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Chris Barker
Nov. 2003
~~~


© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2003-11-16 02:22 PM


well first congrats on your 7000th post...thats a lot of writtin =-) and secondly...wonderful 7000th post i enjoyed it

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

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2 posted 2003-11-16 02:56 PM


Chris, I really loved this...the words and
the picture, as well. And congratulations on
7,000 posts. I've enjoyed every one of your
poems and replies that I've read. I hope to
read many, many more!!
Hugs and love,  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-11-16 02:59 PM


Snowflake - thanks so much for commenting.

Ethel - you are so sweet - thanks. I have enjoyed all of your writes too!

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-11-16 03:08 PM


Seven thousand, and all as picture perfect as this.
Such beauty in the sparkle of your muse Chris.
TD

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5 posted 2003-11-16 03:16 PM


Chris it is so good to have you back! I have missed you sooooo much! Congratulations on 7,000 wonderful posts!

Nice to be able to read your poetry again! This was a lovely November treat!

Welcome back home!

Linda

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6 posted 2003-11-16 03:27 PM


Beautiful expression of November to celebrate your 7,000th post Chris!!
I love this!  Congratulations...
~Love & Miss ya, Teed~

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7 posted 2003-11-16 04:33 PM


Thanks so much TD, EA, and E.   lol. hugs!
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8 posted 2003-11-16 04:50 PM


You captured the essence of this month beautifully.  Congratulations on 7000 posts Chris!!!!!!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2003-11-16 05:13 PM


Beautiful chris

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10 posted 2003-11-16 06:10 PM


scorpio & Christine, Thankyou!!
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11 posted 2003-11-16 06:15 PM




(does happy dance) Yay!!! Oh Chris, we are all soooooooo proud of you, sweet friend, congratulations on 7,000 wonderful posts, you are soooooooo special and loved by us all! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautiful milestone gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-16-2003 06:16 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-11-16 06:23 PM


Noah you are a bright star on an otherwise cloudy night. Thankyou sweetie!!
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13 posted 2003-11-16 06:23 PM


Beautifully said Chris...and a very hearty
congrats. on your latest milestone....
I await the next...

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14 posted 2003-11-16 06:23 PM


lovely, Chris...congratulations

hugs
M

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15 posted 2003-11-16 06:28 PM



A perfect winter presentation
for a 7,000th post!
How wonderful this is...
and how good of you to share it us
would appreciate, and enjoy, Tankas!

Tanka very much!!!


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16 posted 2003-11-16 06:30 PM


Magnus, Maureen & Karilea, your comments mean the world to me. Thankyou so much.
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17 posted 2003-11-16 07:52 PM


Very nice!
Love,
Terri~

Jason Lyle
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18 posted 2003-11-16 07:55 PM


Awesome write Chris!

Jason

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19 posted 2003-11-16 08:49 PM


Secrets hang in glazed divulge
======================

what a very cool line that is....

Congrats on your milestone poetess Chris...
So good to see you posting again...
you are a special part of the pips family.

Words break into splinters on the pages I write
If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ...
Burn forever where the flame turns blue

David Gray

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20 posted 2003-11-16 08:55 PM


Shara, Jason and Janet Marie, Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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21 posted 2003-11-17 01:14 PM


Congratulations on your milestone... you do bless these blue pages! *S*
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22 posted 2003-11-17 01:22 PM


Congratulations!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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23 posted 2003-11-17 01:58 PM


Many thanks suthern & Susan.

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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24 posted 2003-11-17 02:05 PM


"Love's promise solidified
By November's touch of frost"

one can reas this different ways... but I saw the frost freezing something that once was liquid and flowing..stopping the promise perhaps....

congrats on 7000... it's been a joy to read so many of the things you offer to us..

here's to another 7000 and more..


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25 posted 2003-11-17 02:10 PM


Such beauty here!

Congratulations on your 7000th post!

Love, Margherita

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26 posted 2003-11-17 02:12 PM


Cpat. - It is an honour to have you read and comment on my work. Thankyou.

Margherita - Always a joy to see your name. Thankyou !

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27 posted 2003-11-17 04:38 PM


Yes, it's that time of year again...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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28 posted 2003-11-17 05:29 PM


Congrats on this being your 7,000 post
I enjoyed this very much.

*hugs*
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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29 posted 2003-11-17 06:39 PM


NightShade~
Positively BEAUTIFUL~
You grace these pages with such a lovely talent~

Congrats on that milestone~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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30 posted 2003-11-17 07:22 PM


El, Hockeychick & Marge, thankyou so much - I am so happy you read and enjoyed this tanka.
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31 posted 2003-11-17 07:24 PM


November is being a good month for me...congratulations of 7000 post Nightshade...James
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32 posted 2003-11-17 08:03 PM


Glad to hear you are having a good month James, and thankyou !!

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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