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Why Men Frustrate Women |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
In floral flushed questions, bending to the tidal pull of my longings she asks why do you love me? Drinking her mouth, the moonlight plays on bare skin, lighting my way through her garden as I take to flight. ~ Why do you love me? The color of roses: thorn cuts. ~ WHY do you love me? Ethers gather in swirling turning flushed wan moonlight. ~ LISTEN: WHY DO YOU LOVE ME!?!! Touching me with words woven, a blanket wrapped in opaque bunting while you monkey around? Cards fall, fallen kings and queens making flat love on the carpet where I preach to open ears, a sermon of my moonlit wish... ~ Pretty woman scowls parting her mouth to howl at the harvest moon. ~ Man sings to Luna, now laughing in her soup above the silence. First poem is a Sijo, then Mondo, then Katauta, a Somonka, and two Haiku. Even with insects- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
But WHY do you love me???? As I smile pondering that question always unanswered.  M |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
This was inspired by my fiance who likes to ask that question at the oddest times. Thanks for reading. Sparticus |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, and of course, you never answer even though you always answer. Enjoyed every line of this. BTW, nice to meet you! |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
The problem is, there are a million and three reasons why I love her! Where do I begin? It is nice to meet you too! Sparticus |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Why do you love mee..... The answer is in my heart, hidden and kept away.. There it will forever be and stay.. Smile Jes |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
I think I would be in trouble if I didn't at least say...well, your hair is nice and I enjoy the way you eat! At least give her clues! Thank you for reading and your response was golden!  Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent composition....an intriguing subject...one which many of us males attempt to grasp daily...often... infinitely... welcome to Passions. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you, Magnus. I don't think I have ever been able to answer it to my darlings satisfaction. Often she stops me and says...just kiss me and shut up!  Even with insects- |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
the thoughts accumulating debris in ocean's swell  real men need no refuge no shelter in a storm by having once survived a woman's righteous scorn |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you, Icebox...  Turning to me, she shadows me in her snowy grace while laughing Sparticus Even with insects- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome writings! I could learn a lot from you. Thanks for sharing. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you Passing Shadows, we learn from each other, that is why it is important to read and learn and understand. All of us will be the better for a combined effort to constantly improve! Sparticus |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Spartacus, you leave me breathless...  Love, Light & Poetry! Earth Angel |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Fainting woman falls onto the mattress covered by opulent eyes. Thank you, Earth Angel. Sparticus |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sparticus, The best way is a smile, a look, a touch. Perhaps a brush. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Deep into her eyes I fall, swimming under warm glints of sunlight as her hair falls, a rainbow curves her plump lips to a kiss. Thank you for your response...good words that I live by...but still she asks! Even with insects- |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions.... Stunning first post, especially the last stanza...Hope you enjoy your time here... Greeneyes~  ~~**~~ i carry your heart with me |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
This is a question I have never been able to answer. I don't think it possible to put the emotion into words though I diligently try in my poems. Wonderful write, and welcome to PIP! "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Eyes and Joe... Asking her, she speaks hours on what you mean to her, and still wonders. This is my second post, but I will be doing many more, this site is full of great folk. Sparticus. |
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