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OoL0sTLuvAoO
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0 posted 2003-11-16 08:09 AM


-=Playing Love=-
Love, a word that can drive a person to there knees.
Love , yet the word is so sweet.

What pumps through my veins is not blood, but its a desire to love or be loved.
The path i am on is not a path, but an endless ride looking for love.

Hints been given, the game being played, but then your crushed, when she walks away.
The ride has stopped there is nowhere to go as my heart needs love and love is a no-show.

There is no love, there is no faith, and it's a game being played because your in HER Domain.

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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2003-11-16 08:49 AM


Welcome to Passions. Nice first post. I think we all get tired of Playing at Love. Well done.

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-11-16 09:02 AM


OoL0sTLuvAoO
LOL you talking about love or desire?
Good write.

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3 posted 2003-11-16 05:24 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
Please check your email for a special greeting.

Nancy

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4 posted 2003-11-16 06:00 PM






(smiles) This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, love should play but never play games as it is too special and can't be toyed with! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

lil' Angel
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5 posted 2003-11-16 07:13 PM


OoL0sTLuvAoO Excellent peome.
Welcome to Passions.

OoL0sTLuvAoO
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6 posted 2003-11-16 07:18 PM


Thank you for warm welcome

feel's like home ^_^

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