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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-11-16 06:58 AM

slip silk
fingers
make no knot
pulling
from the loom
I need

drifting
in
the cloud
of this
satin butter
on my lips
caramel -
you're such a tease...

see?

That's what you do to me.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-16 07:01 AM

Loved the beginning...
all the way to the end...

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

2 posted 2003-11-16 07:29 AM

..serenity blaze../\..words that sing..very nice..

../\..Spiros

-----------calm---------

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

3 posted 2003-11-16 07:35 AM

Mmm...caramel! Now I am feeling hungry! LOL! Very nice piece serenity. Now I have to go slay the chocolate and caramel monster. (Wink!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2003-11-16 09:20 AM

Now this is an interesting way to start the morning!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-11-16 09:26 AM

serenity,
Well it wasn't me. LOL

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2003-11-16 08:42 PM

satin butter
on my lips
caramel -
==================

you have the same effect on me...

OH? NOT FOR ME???? Errr ... Ok....
LMAO

Words break into splinters on the pages I write
If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ...
Burn forever where the flame turns blue

David Gray

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2003-11-16 09:01 PM

Karen this is sooooo cool.

hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

8 posted 2003-11-16 11:47 PM

webspinning...

smmmmmmmmmmile

yes

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

9 posted 2003-11-16 11:59 PM

wow...love this...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-11-17 05:04 AM

I need to find somebody to do that to me!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2003-11-17 11:29 AM

hmmmmmmm...delicious!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-11-17 06:51 PM

Lovely...one of my favorites...James

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

13 posted 2003-11-17 09:45 PM

if you only knew...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2003-11-17 09:50 PM

YES! what a cool write!

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