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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-11-16 01:34 AM

Perchance to dance is all I seek Fair Muse,
It matters not the song to which thee choose,
As long as we embrace, as one entwine,
Beneath the gentle glow of vespertine.
To feel the rhythm of thy coursing heart,
Against my chest, do not thee know thou art
Venus, jeweled goddess of the evening sky,
A radiant gem, who shines from heaven’s high
Upon a man, a mortal man below
Who seeks thy touch, sweet taste thy lips bestow,
Fair Muse, take of my hand and dance with me,
Across the width and breadth of welkin’s sea.
A lover’s waltz is all I seek, perchance
Fair Muse, to dance with thee in passion’s dance.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-11-16 02:18 AM

me thinks you just danced a fine song

She
Junior Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 41
Wishing On A Northern Star

2 posted 2003-11-16 02:46 AM

sometimes a dance is enough...and nothing more

Why do some of them always want more when only some is perfect?

Beautiful poetry language you have here, Sir.

"You put a stain on all of my good days."
Matchbox Twenty "Disease"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-11-16 06:40 AM

No one should ever
turn down
such an invitation...
or invocation!

Thank you, Tim.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2003-11-16 07:49 AM

Oh wow! Love the meter...and the rhyme! Very well done sir. This is a fantastic piece and just made my #1 must read list of the day! Bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-11-16 08:38 AM

Absolutely superb. I love your images...a waltz with Fair Muse. How beautiful! And then there comes the meter, the rhyme. You have penned a perfect poetic package... Everything I love in poetry.

What a lovely way to start my Sunday.

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-11-16 09:12 AM

Tim,
An invitation few women could refuse.
Well done my friend.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-11-16 09:55 AM

I think she was there, and if she wasn't WOW I really am going to watch for your writes when she is. If this is your offering when she's not around I can only imagine what's to come. Amazing!!

Love,
Terri~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-11-16 09:57 AM

~smiling~ again this morning at a beautifully written work.

M

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