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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-11-15 06:43 PM



When love goes away, there is nothing but night
The things that were treasured are no longer right
The darkness surrounds and the tears flow like rain
When love goes away, it's replacement is pain...

The dreams that were shared now belong to the past
Reality hits like a cold winter's blast
You soon come to feel what you've tried to deny
That what you called love, only lived in your eyes...

When love goes away, it takes part of your soul
It breaks you, and shatters the heart that was whole
But no one can hear when you fall to the ground
For love simply leaves without warning, or sound...


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-15 06:57 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sunnyone, I am familiar with this feeling ever too well, dearest friend, God Bless You, and I send angel hugs out to all those who face this hurt! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-11-15 07:04 PM


It's such a God awful feeling isn't it!  If we're lucky enough to find the answers inside of ourselves,  we learn to accept the reasons why and move on.  I don't think any of us are perfect, mistakes are a given, both in friendship and in love.  Placing the blame serves no purpose and only fuels the fire....that, being my first mistake.

This is so sad, and so true, breaks my heart in two all over again.

Nicely done Sunnyone~
I hope this isn't about you.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-16 12:36 PM


SunnyOne~
You are ALWAYS a worthwhile read, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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4 posted 2003-11-16 12:56 PM


Hugsss Lady....so achingly sad....a feeling I can relate to so very well....very moving this is....peace



Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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5 posted 2003-11-16 01:32 AM


I know
suthern
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6 posted 2003-11-17 10:32 AM


When love goes away, it takes part of your soul
It breaks you, and shatters the heart that was whole
But no one can hear when you fall to the ground
For love simply leaves without warning, or sound...

And leaves us only the companionship of heartache... Excellent write!!!

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-11-17 10:45 AM


Oh Sunny, that was so achingly sweet ~ but sad. You have really outdone yourself with this authentic ~ and highly poetic! ~ piece of writing!

Loves 'n hugs for my dear kindred spirit across the ocean!

Linda

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-11-18 06:22 PM


Outstanding...one of my favorites...I know the feeling well...James
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