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PouringJewels
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0 posted 2003-11-15 11:45 AM



         In the very depths of my mind,
         I wish harm and pain to someone.
         Wrong, yes I may be.
         But don't put the blame on me.

         I gave more than asked for.
         Been honest and good down to my core.
         But when someone stomps out my life,
         For no other reason but their own strife,
       . I can't help it when
         My mind says revenge.

             Wrong I may be

        

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1 posted 2003-11-15 11:48 AM



I won't deny that one can have
wrong thoughts...
it's the actions we need to watch out for.

Good write, Julia.

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2 posted 2003-11-15 11:50 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Having these thoughts is perfectly natural and human, the challenge is controlling them and not letting the revenge be taken! (sigh) I understand how you feel, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

PouringJewels
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3 posted 2003-11-15 11:53 AM


Great come back. I would never take action. I only hate my wicked inner thoughts. God love you, you said exactly the right thing to me.
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4 posted 2003-11-15 11:59 AM



In just getting to read you and to know you through your writing, I'm glad my "come back" was well received.  Sometimes, I even blush at my own thoughts of revenge.  But you know what they say, "the best revenge is in living well."

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-11-15 09:51 PM


no revenge is sweet, say I
oh yes it is.......lolol
especially on a cheating spouse.......lol

Foxyoasis
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6 posted 2003-11-15 09:53 PM


I like that very much and I have been in your situation before. Good Write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Magic Solias
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7 posted 2003-11-15 10:01 PM


Nothing wrong with revengeful feelings and thoughts.  Because we are capable of rationality we are able to resist their urge to be actualized.  Good you feel that you may be wrong, that shows that you have a conscience.  Something most politicians lack these days.  

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

PouringJewels
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8 posted 2003-11-15 10:29 PM


The best revenge is living well. This is not about a love gone wrong. It's about one that took away my living well. What now, Sunshine?
littlewing
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9 posted 2003-11-16 01:32 AM


Not wrong, only human
Julia . . . it is natural
for REAL people to feel as this
It is acting upon that feeling
that makes one unhuman
*smile*
love you here writing
xxoo

GG
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10 posted 2003-11-16 02:02 AM


...this, is why I punch walls.
I know what you mean, well said.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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11 posted 2003-11-16 02:13 AM


I know this well
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