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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-15 12:57 PM


desperation signifies

evolve over dissolved multiplicity
creation of space-weight
from ephemeral

part departs from whole
to become
an entire,

and then to grow
to a part…

a light is never darker
than darkness
yet darkness can glow
as a light.

swindle lines are whips
recognized as void-takers
until they are forgotten
and void

why pretend amnesiac
when memories are transformed
to future?…    


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-11-15 01:00 AM


swindle lines are whips
recognized as void-takers
until they are forgotten
and void

Oh, that's rich, I mean really, that's so good!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-15 03:49 AM


you are very complex and very deep...leaving me to wonder which I should attempt to conquer first
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
3 posted 2003-11-15 08:27 AM


light is never darker
than darkness
yet darkness can glow
as a light.

yes it can, like sunshine in the rain, and rain within the shining sun
its all like that sometimes

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-15 12:54 PM




(sigh) Everything is interconnected and amnesia happens to be one of those many things that only bleed into the future! (big hugggsssssss) So in the end, nothing fails, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Petre, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-16 01:20 AM


still wondering
Magic Solias
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 73
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6 posted 2003-11-16 05:20 PM


Very deep.  Difficult to understand at first, but that's the mark of a great poem.

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

Magic Solias
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 73
California, USA
7 posted 2003-11-16 05:28 PM


Very deep.  Difficult to understand at first, but that's the mark of a great poem.

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
8 posted 2003-11-16 08:00 PM


Well done, complex and well said.

Jason

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