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Master
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0 posted 2003-11-15 12:26 PM


I recited my poetry on the bank of a river
The weeping willow heard me and began to sway...
I repeated my verses for the green caterpillar,
She turned into a butterfly and fluttered away...
I followed it slowly into the evening skyline,
The skyline turned pink and began to blush.
The gusting wind bit its lip and grew silent,
The world was submersed by a sudden hush.
I paused for a second to hear my own breathing,
And I was at peace and relaxed here, among
The willow, the butterfly, the wind and the evening,
But you were asleep, so I ended my song...


Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master



[This message has been edited by Master (11-15-2003 12:33 AM).]

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lil' Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-15 01:03 AM


That's a beautiful Poem.
Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 2003-11-15 01:43 AM


Thanks
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-11-16 03:52 AM


I think the nature is poetry...
its so beautiful to tell it while you're there

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Kevin
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4 posted 2003-11-17 03:44 AM


different for you man
but I like where its goin
drop me a line

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