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lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
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0 posted 2003-11-14 11:20 PM


Boy
Why Can't you see
That we were meant to be?
Why can't you see what's right in front of you?
Why can't you see that we are perfect for each other?
Why do you look esle where for what's right in front of you?
Why don't you open your georgeous sparkling eyes and rally look?
Boy
Why can't you see?

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-11-14 11:25 PM


This has a lot of truth in it. I really liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
2 posted 2003-11-14 11:30 PM


Give that boy a kick in the ... hehhehe smile sorry we may not say bad words smile

But this one was meant good, so that he will turn and look

Smile'

Jes


Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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3 posted 2003-11-14 11:46 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I feel for you as unrequited love or denied love is ever so common, sweet friend, here's hoping for the best to come to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 205
California
4 posted 2003-11-15 12:37 PM


great questions but unanswerable. great work
Lil' Angel!
I have a poem that explores the other side.
I'll post it.

WildPoet

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

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