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Is This Love?... |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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things seem so different between us whats changed? flushed cheeks awkward silences somethings different i can feel it did i change? did you change? i'm so confused is this love?.... [This message has been edited by exhale (11-14-2003 11:13 PM).] |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hmmmmm i know the meaning of the words you wrote there but i think you should begin to talk together, cause teher is something in those words that tell, that one has something to get out. Smile, sometimes its better to become released of the thoughts we have also when they mean a new way to go in life. But to be true to each self must be the best, before that it cant be true love. Jes Smiles and hopes for ya [This message has been edited by Jes (11-14-2003 11:03 PM).] |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
I really like your poem and I think that it is a good poem the way it is and that you shouldn't change it. |
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