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paladin
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0 posted 2003-11-14 09:36 PM


The world is a stage
We hide behind our "face masks"
Never showing truth


paladin

....a knight without armor

[This message has been edited by paladin (11-14-2003 09:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-14 09:55 PM


truth is shadows play
walls of cave have shimmering--
let the curtain fall.




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2 posted 2003-11-14 10:23 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I only pray that the audience can identify the lies as dramatic irony is what we all really need here! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a marvelous challenge response, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-11-15 12:00 PM


Paladin, thanks for playing along.

I'm gonna need to digest this for awhile. But, I will say that this is a very tight little Senryu. Well thought out...well crafted.

Ed

Ok, I've digested, and it would seem that the icebox is lurking nearby...

Nice!

[This message has been edited by wranx (11-15-2003 12:21 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-11-15 01:28 AM


Ok I am completely fooled paladin
I was going to say Raph . . .
beautiful senyru

(how did you get that , Ed? sheesh)
xxoo

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