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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-11-14 05:43 PM


I warned you once
you chose to stand
and one time warned
you understand

that one time pushed
that one time, planned
was one times many
one thousand strands

I asked you once
where did you stand
you answered me
right where I am

I told you then
you're in my spot
and thunder brings
what rain forgot

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (11-14-2003 05:44 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-11-14 06:36 PM


Jason~
My goodness ... this is VERY, VERY good~

'I told you then
you're in my spot
and thunder brings
what rain forgot'


I LOVE this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
2 posted 2003-11-14 08:33 PM


I like this.

:-)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-11-14 08:43 PM


Excellent!!  I love it!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2003-11-14 08:44 PM


Kool write...enjoyed...jwesley
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