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In Soft Gather

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Marge Tindal
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In Soft Gather
~*Marge Tindal*~


You came in soft gather
of hard lessons from the past
Hoping to undo the ache
that the break had cast~

The pleas of please forgive me
fell fervently from your lips
Not realizing that before you asked
I already had~

As I looked into your eyes
watching you fall apart
I knew that the pain of letting you go
would not be easy on my heart~

So I held you very close
one time more for love’s sake
Knowing that we will meet again
not as lover’s … but as friends
And we will cherish that moment
foreverly~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Bec
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1 posted 11-14-2003 04:37 PM       View Profile for Bec   Email Bec   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bec

Marge, this one actually made me sad, but it's a beautiful write.

Bec

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

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2 posted 11-14-2003 04:39 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

nice read
Sunshine
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3 posted 11-14-2003 04:39 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


This is the Marge I know...
tenderly so.
Betty
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4 posted 11-14-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for Betty   Email Betty   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Betty

Excellent
Love ya,
Betty
Bonnie j
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5 posted 11-14-2003 06:27 PM       View Profile for Bonnie j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bonnie j

So sad this poem, but so loving also.
Beautiful write Marge and lets not forget the sadness.
Love Bon-Bon

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Somewhere in time~


6 posted 11-14-2003 06:36 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

This absolutely aches Marge.
So painfully beautiful.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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7 posted 11-14-2003 09:09 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

loved the love in this marge...

jwesley
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8 posted 11-14-2003 09:23 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Ah, Marge, this was hard to read my friend. The love, tenderness and heartache touched me so deeply.

I hope it will work this way.

Hugs and loves, Marti

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Blessed Mother Teresa

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9 posted 11-14-2003 09:31 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

hugssss sweet lady, I never like to see you blue.....


Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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The pleas of please forgive me
fell fervently from your lips
Not realizing that before you asked
I already had~

I wish!!!  Forgiveness is a trait to be admired...your poem made my heart race and sigh out loud.  Thank you for shedding the softest light and touching on a subject that makes all the difference in the world.

Peace to you Marge~
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...if I only had half your strength...
Neeraja
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12 posted 11-15-2003 07:37 AM       View Profile for Neeraja   Email Neeraja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Neeraja

What a beautiful poem...

Neeraja
Marge Tindal
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I appreciate each of you for reading this little piece of my heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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The pleas of please forgive me
fell fervently from your lips
Not realizing that before you asked
I already had~

Having needed forgiveness before, I know what a gift this is...

This sad write is so loving... so excellent.
Tim
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'tis another fine one you have penned from the heart.
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16 posted 11-16-2003 04:58 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Fantastic.. With feeling, the way it should be.
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17 posted 11-16-2003 05:16 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I believe I can feel this one...


M
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Marge, your beautiful soul is showing! The Universe has a way of rewarding such beneficence. This generosity of spirit will not go unnoticed.

~ As you sow Dear One, may you receive back tenfold or more...

Loving, healing hugs,
EarthyOne
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A very beautiful and moving piece of writing here Marge.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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20 posted 11-16-2003 09:31 PM       View Profile for SimplyGold   Email SimplyGold   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SimplyGold

Yes, this is a sweet sorrow. Well done!
SG
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21 posted 11-17-2003 05:48 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

A peice of your heart so sweet to read even though it brought a tear or two of remember.


Dee

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Marge, this sounds so sad, but beautifully written. I hope you are ok.
Marge Tindal
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My deepest thanks to each of you for the kindness of your replies~
Sincerely~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

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very tasty, Marge...
especially liked the "foreverly"
thanks
Daniel

[This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (11-25-2003 07:35 PM).]

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