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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-11-14 10:19 AM



Heelstuck

sorry to be
stuck to your
heel like this

but you did say
you hoped I'd
never leave you

just before you
fed me to
your dog

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (11-14-2003 10:31 AM).]

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-11-14 10:42 AM


ouchhhhhhie

brutally honest...reminding me of someone I knew...loved and was most definately in love with once...maybe still am...in a way, a much better way...within the lessons learned.

Good one

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-11-14 10:44 AM


(chuckling)... a sense of humor in the bleak and hurtful.....

well done sir...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-11-14 11:02 AM


James,

suthern
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Louisiana
4 posted 2003-11-16 04:18 PM


I misread your title... thought at first it was Heelstruck... After reading, that title seems applicable, too... for it certainly sounds as though you're not being appreciated and feeling kicked around. *S*

Sad situation but excellent work!

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-11-16 05:40 PM


OUCH!!
Excellent thoughts put to pen James.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-16 09:08 PM


Oh, my! At least you didn't die! ...and you lived to tell the tail! I mean "tale"!

Gosh, that is not a pretty tail! I mean "tale"!

Well, it is only fitting that she now has to contend with poo poo on her shoe shoe!

Seriously speaking, I'm sorry that you were treated so 'poo'ly.

I'm sending you healing hugs and something to scrape yourself off of the ground so that you can get back on your feet.


EA


beckers716
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since 2003-11-16
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Ohio
7 posted 2003-11-16 09:27 PM


This is exactly how someone just made me feel. You captured it perfectly!
Kahlil
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8 posted 2003-11-17 02:11 AM


Wow!  I guess she really stepped in it.  This is great!  ~K~
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