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Ice queen (Masquerade challenge)
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Ice queen (Masquerade challenge) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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I'll also apologize to the poet that I've surely insulted here...This turns out to be way harder than I expected...But great fun. The challenge is here /pip/Forum7/HTML/000592.html She shivers me smiling white ice speaking crystals That glide uncertain over the shards of their brethren Paving her a path from ideas in whithered parchment To notions writ in ether [This message has been edited by wranx (11-14-2003 01:24 AM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I know who this is. And I don't want to spoil the answer for anyone else by getting it on my first guess. Let me just say I like how you took both this poet's likely subject matter and also their habitual treatment of it, and applied it to their style. You're obviously a big fan of this person.  I knew as soon as I read the last few lines exactly who this was meant to emulate. You did well, Ed. Faith is a fine invention |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thank you Brian. Yes, a big fan...always have been. I do believe that you know who's clothes I wear here. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do your own challenge very well. Smiling at the muse you masqued yourself with. Well done, poet. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done on this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I know too... most excellent dark yeti. (ooooooooooooops....)  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am sure that he would be honored with this write Ed. He is most definately a one and only.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I don't know anyone well enough here to even guess...but still, enjoy what you have written..and the writes of others... Thank you for sharing. Kind, interesting and very flattering to whomever. Happy Friday |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A classic in its own right, Ed! Ed ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Baby? you know , *laughing here* I couldnt figure out who you were writing of and I read this over and over and over . . . *hand to brow* *eyes narrowed* then . . . it clicked THAT is exactly how I read this fine writer . . . the fact that I was reading you like I read him made me smile you have done beautifully they will be so honored xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I believe a poet takes all kinds when it comes to form, and I know this poet you ar epaying homage to is more than blessed to be appreciated for his or her form, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a great challenge going, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiul heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Well no one's saying but i see Mike in this, it has to be..right? regardless amazing words as always |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yep you captured the reverence inherent in his words the reverence of life the ability to SEE instead of merely look smile that means.... it is within you also DING fries are done |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ed?... this is beautiful, my friend. A perfect masquerade...smile Hugs, you...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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