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exhale
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0 posted 2003-11-14 12:12 PM


if life could be
like the words you
said to me on
the night we fell
asleep in each others
arms
i would never want to
close my eyes again

© Copyright 2003 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-14 12:46 PM


awesome write!
carol
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2 posted 2003-11-14 01:12 PM


A nice read thanks for sharing

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Lots of Love
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3 posted 2003-11-14 01:37 PM


~~Sigh~~

Very lovely....beautiful images come to mind
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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4 posted 2003-11-14 02:23 PM


Chelsea~
Such a gentle read of perfect emotions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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5 posted 2003-11-14 02:24 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I wish for life to always be like this for you and for true happiness to be your musical anthem! (big hugggsssssss)  You have a deserving heart of the many blessings of the world, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-11-14 02:29 PM


exhale,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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