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vandana
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0 posted 2003-11-13 05:00 PM



Tell me
Tonight
We are here
Here to stay
Tell me
what can we do?
Tell me
If our love is enough
to hold on
So tell me
What can we do?
Can we make our love to stay
Can we take our breathe away
Can we try to say these words?
Can we cry over the time
Tell me
If we can hold on
to the time
So tell me
When you are here to stay
Tell me
what can we do?
Tell me
Where can we go?
If this love is enough
to stay
What can we do?
Tell me
If love is here
to stay.....



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1 posted 2003-11-13 05:42 PM


Lovely lovely Vandana!
And, I do hope the love is here to stay for you.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-13 05:45 PM


beautiful write
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-11-13 05:50 PM


Hi Vandana  
I really liked this one.
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-11-14 02:46 PM




(smiles) I think that is another beauty of love, it's unpredictable and you just have to wait and see what suprises you are gifted with! (kiss on cheek) I wish the utmost happiness for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-11-14 03:13 PM


This is beautiful Vandana!

Eric

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