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LiL-Jew
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since 2003-10-28
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0 posted 2003-11-13 03:49 PM



Something's we can keep
But other's are hard to get
A heart that is so fragile
Or a friend you'll never forget.

But there's one thing that's more important
It's bigger than your heart
It is something that doesn't belong to you
It's given as a gift from God.

Every person has this thing
It is mean to stick w/ you till you die
This thing has many feelings you can name
It can even make you cry.

W/ out this thing thered' be no humans
There'd be no animals too
There wouldnt be this earth or even the universe
And nothing will even move.

God have us this thing
So we can learn to breathe, to walk, and run again
But when it's time to leave this place
We take this thing w/ us to heaven.

This thing is placed inside us
Like a tape that you record
It turns and turns untill the end
You'll know when your voice is heard.

This thing is not that simple
We all make mistakes
We are made to fix this puzzle
And choose between our love's and hates.

We are created on this earth
To choose which place is right
To heaven which is hard to reach
Or to hell where people burn insight.

As you can see that
God loves us very dear
He gave us this thing as a gift
To choose between happiness and fear.

He gave us only 1 chance
You can't relive again
And you only have 2 ways
Either hell or heaven.

This special thing is 'life'
It's 10 times more important than your heart
Not the thing is, how you live your life
That's your gift to God.

Like a ta

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