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Ku'uipo
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since 2003-09-25
Posts 42


0 posted 2003-11-13 02:39 PM



I never knew crimson could shine so bright,
Irredescent almost invisible color,
It burns my eyes,
Steady glow,
The ocean becomes a living canvas,
With all the shades of fire and ice,
Dancing upon the water's surface,
Reflecting something no one else can see,
What a mysery,
The scorched sky,
The horizon disappears with the sun,
Hills merge into the mist,
The serenity stalls time,
I am captured in a masterpiece.

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-11-13 02:42 PM


The ocean becomes a living canvas,
With all the shades of fire and ice,
Dancing upon the water's surface,
Reflecting something no one else can see,
What a mysery,

This is a masterpiece!  Loved this verse, with its fine descriptions.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-11-13 02:45 PM


This is beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
3 posted 2003-11-13 02:56 PM


Sounds beautiful.  Thank you.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-11-13 05:59 PM


I've seen this before...a nice scene
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