Hmmmmmmm .......... How so ...... How so ......

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Open Poetry #29

Hmmmmmmm .......... How so ...... How so ......

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2003-11-13 01:25 PM

Why is life a running flood..
Why is life all we got..

We have to decide ..
I could have criet ..

Let me look in those eyes ..
And life no more tell lies ..

I am just mee ..
Is this how it is to bee ..

I need to get back and live ..
With her the new others need to forgive ..

I want to be mee i cry ..
Thats why i never could lie ..

Smile

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (11-13-2003 01:28 PM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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1 posted 2003-11-13 01:38 PM

nice

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2003-11-13 01:43 PM

it's always important to just be yourself

good write Jes...you are doing well with the English language...keep learning

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

3 posted 2003-11-13 01:48 PM

Thanks

Smile

And tahnks to you too Passing, the language is still on learning never will get perfect smile, but i like to play with the words and their feelings smile.

Smile

Jes

Mistletoe Angel

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4 posted 2003-11-15 02:55 PM

(sigh) There is nothing more dangerous and pitiful than a liar in this world, and to be youself is the most golden reward and accomplishment of all! (big hugggssssss)n God Bless You, sweet friend, let your heart shine, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jes, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

5 posted 2003-11-16 10:39 AM

Thanks for ya comment Mistletoe angel, smile
and you are right, but we "people" do many times lie to us selves. Maybe because we feel we have to, and yes sometimes we need to live with things how they are but other times we simply cant cause that goes out over what we feel we are.

And then we have to make a decission, and we need to take it before time just rolls it over.

Smile

jes

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