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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Can you tread on sacred ground and not remember? feel the passion and now be so cold? Can two hearts once joined ever really be apart? When did you start loving me and how did you stop? If candle's flame still burns deep in my soul are you out there somewhere feeling the same? I know I'll live on by I will always die again at mention of your name. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Brad...this absolutely aches! Very well done indeed. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BradMajors~ 'When did you start loving me and how did you stop?' This IS a sad, aching write~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...just a name rips it all apart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well written piece Brad. Enjoyed. Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Once love was there it never fades away just so but it gets to an end were we have to start on a fresh sometimes. Thats never because love stopped but because we came it to close. Hope you find her the one, once more that can be done. Smile Jes |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh this does ache  like a knife wound, sharp, and then deep throbbing aching pain... Said so well. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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