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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-11-13 09:27 AM


Book sized collections of time
Mourn, howl and grieving life
Turbulently heartfelt
Standing aloof on our sleeves
Outpouring illusion confirmed in appearance
To revise emotional conflicts
Called completed cycles…or corporate realignments
Flowering or’r the fairest of lands
And written in every detailed bible
Subsequent addictions…registers every workman
Infectious diseases crossing the street with demons
Authorized and accepted, civilizations ruined
Wherein oppressive plagues nauseating the mind visions
Performing tangible lies by grave robbers fondling grief’s demise
Our romantic library and spirit in words streetwise
Movements into an inner truth and sense of realism
Where unnatural emotions feed tormenting fearsome
With teeth clenched and techniques gone absurdly rye
Desires haunting depraved, stricken with the degradation of betrayal
Decaying visions of love into a pathetic realism stable
Surrounded by messages, traditional forums, where trite notions disable
Taking all evil history to the core of relationships
Contaminating what should be a sacred union & friendship


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-13 11:19 AM


LeeJ,
All very true, enjoyed.


ice
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Pennsylvania
2 posted 2003-11-13 11:53 AM


LeeJ
A true and powerful song, well worded and sung...I didn't qite feel so all alone in my thoughts, when I read this....thank you..
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passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-13 12:49 PM


*admiring your way with words*
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4 posted 2003-11-13 12:50 PM


well done
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