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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Go with me to the center of the institute Where poetry represents irrelevance Intellectual indulgence Resonant, where culture lives, free speaking alive Its own reflective larger then life structures Thought and expressions Heroic couplets pretentious Echoes putting ideas to action Even calm in the way we argue Claiming voice…rise from trivial tings Happenstances... Where e’er you whisper through streams Embracing romance, past sleep, threading Thoughtful sounds meaningful, like the voice of reason endlessly Familiarity connected into sentimental rhyme Making long fibers of syllables Heads spinning youthful…smothering alarms waking in morning with you by my side Evening wind carries on indefinitely Nothing like holding your hand in mine Surrendering to this relaxed migration In a familiar place, a familiar time Understanding your smile And infinite closeness White circles of silence Engulf, tying a pure endearing knot Angels faces smile with sun filled white caps Like vines engulfing, comforting There is no dust in the air, For we learned so see the sea Along with the mists that rise Periodically.. If I fail you, please forgive me We are twins not listening to mocking birds Strictly experimental, holding on to A variety of definitions, embracing Contemporary literature…. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"...Oh, it's rape in the Engineering Building!" Alan Tate ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very awesome poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
For we learned so see the sea Along with the mists that rise Periodically.. If I fail you, please forgive me Oh that is ripe, and said so beautifully. Lots to love about your poem LeeJ~ Enjoyed the read, very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your poetry to me is always a magic garden. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What a magnificent blend of thoughts.... a birthing place for poets and poems.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ I like the meandering mind of you ... it takes me places I know I should be~ 'White circles of silence' THIS ... is a quiet inspire~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
 ... I cannot find any words to say of this, other than it's excellent. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I always enjoy reading your downhome goodness of your heart and its muses, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Familiarity connected into sentimental rhyme Making long fibers of syllables Heads spinning youthful…smothering alarms Wow....your writing amazes me. hugs,Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
more folks should read you |
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