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Keth
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since 2003-11-10
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0 posted 2003-11-10 05:33 AM



drowning myself in
abandoned dark lakes

oh
bittersweet death
and pain

be quiet
but
please stay.

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WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 205
California
1 posted 2003-11-10 05:50 AM


Whoa, Cool
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2003-11-10 06:52 AM


Yes, I agree, very cool...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-11-10 09:50 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry.
Very thought provoking first post.
We look forward to seeing more of your work,
and please check you email for a special greeting.

Nancy

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
4 posted 2003-11-10 11:01 AM


A warm welcome to Passion in Poetry.  I enjoyed your first posting.  And I look forward to reading more of your work.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-11-10 11:16 AM


Keth
You have to make up your mind. Enjoyed

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2003-11-10 11:20 AM


     
Hi and welcome to Passions,

I look forward to reading more from you
Greeneyes~




[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-10-2003 11:38 AM).]

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
7 posted 2003-11-10 11:34 AM


I have to agree with Seymor but your mind should stay here, were it belongs, smile.

my wishes are not like that its like the one i told in " Her eyes told my story "

Or maybe even better thats my dream i want to fullfill.

Smile

Jes


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8 posted 2003-11-12 09:53 PM






(smiles) Yay! Oh Keth, this is a very powerful debut, dearest friend, and here we help one another chase the darkness always with sunshining compassion, sympathy and love! This is poignant, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Keth, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Keth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-11-13 04:09 AM


wow...this is awesome!
Neeraja
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The Netherlands
10 posted 2003-11-13 04:27 AM


What a tribute!!!

Welcome Keth!

Neeraja

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