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Grays & Tears

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Varuch Elohim
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0 posted 11-10-2003 01:52 AM       View Profile for Varuch Elohim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Varuch Elohim


Grays & Tears

Do you remember me?
I am the light and illusion flickering around you
Fading into an indistinct existence
This was once my place

Do you still feel my love?
A mélange of passions shaded in grays and tears
Diminishing into an undefined splatter of reality
I reach out across the astral plane

Take a leap of faith!
I am here for you again
My soul manifests
As a pronounced fascination of sentiments
Dimension and time converging around us

I'm right here
You just have to believe

Wreathed in an elegant nimbus of remembrance
My soul arches in a graceful ascent above the moon cast sky
How is it you cannot see me?

Compelled by love
My spirit rests here beside you
Imprinted in elaborations of unseen eons
I await your awakening, my Love


© Copyright 2003 Varuch Elohim - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 11-10-2003 04:18 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Wow, well done! Welcome to PIP. I ejoyed this, very much.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 11-10-2003 08:17 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Varuch~

Welcome to Passions~

This is a tenderly penned piece~
I am certain that you are going to like being here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

LeeJ
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3 posted 11-10-2003 08:20 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

beautifully written and expressed....welcome to passions and looking forward to reading more of your poems.  
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 11-10-2003 08:44 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Welcome to Passions!
A beautiful entrance piece you have graced our pages with!
Please enjoy your stay with us here at Passions.
Please check your email for a special greeting!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


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What a lovely first post! Welcome to Passions!!  It's going to be good having you here - I enjoyed very much your use of words and thought process.  I think you're going to like it here.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

scorpio
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right...there


6 posted 11-10-2003 08:51 AM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Welcome. I look forward to reading more of your work.

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 11-10-2003 10:31 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Welcome to Passions... this is beautiful! *S*
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(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is a beautiful debut, sweet friend, and may your call forever awaken your love and may awakening and flight forever fill your heart with joy, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Varuch, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Varuch, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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very uplifting write! Welcome!
Neeraja
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10 posted 11-13-2003 04:30 AM       View Profile for Neeraja   Email Neeraja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Neeraja

What a beautiful tribute!!!

I am looking forward to more of this!

Welcome Varuch!

Neeraja
Suetang
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11 posted 11-24-2003 09:49 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Hello Varuch

Finally I have found your first post and what a fabulous read it was.  Your unique talent is so very welcomed here and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful words.  I hope PIP brings you much comfort and happiness.



"In dreams and in love
there are no impossibilities"

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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