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Love is an only god
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Love is an only god |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Love is an only god walking loudly in the stars playing with destiny like rubber toys closing doors and lighting candles in the heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, most definitely.... Nice one dear lady....ya gots duh touch!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Normally I would say "Good God, where did you get this"; but I see it, in the poem. Hugs, YOU |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very true and beautiful Martie. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
*GRINNN* That is REALLY good! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, love is magical and truly lights any candle and brings out the boy and girl in everyone's heart, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Closing and opening.....sometimes with the same motion.... Well done Martie. This little gem a pleasure to see. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartiSis~ Yes, I have known that god~ You are the mistress of poetic thoughts that cause us all to read you ... again and again~ Love you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie Sometimes love does seem to be an "only God" Rapture makes us blind to other entities..But a reality tells us, sometimes to late, that the dogma has different effect than what is on the surface...Our rubber balls deflate, and maybe we should have left the door open....but I enjoyed the romance and views in this one anyway... << |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
as always... it's a pleasure to read you Martie dear. hugs beautiful. M fate is not just |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Love is only a god and not the only god in his family. If he walks loudly, plays games with what we call destiny, it may be merely a try for attention. Children do that you know, and in affairs of the heart, each of us is a child playing loud games and lighting tiny candles. Even a god. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a great poem Martie - just great!!!! Paul |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
whoa...i am completely in love with this...it's perfect joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, this is just beautiful.  Hugs sweet lady, Ethel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Martie, I love your writing style. I always learn something from your writing. ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, love can be all of that... and more.  ~ May your life be filled with joyous love, dear heart.  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wow! |
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