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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-11-09 12:40 PM



Within the confines
of my heart

and the tightly filled corners
of life I’ve set aside
for quiet reflection,

I sense you...

and as I move slowly to one side
to give you a bigger share
of space in my life,

(though you appear to
not always accept it)

I know you are here with me.

And even when I ignore you

you do not retaliate.

I sense you.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-09 12:50 PM


it's like that, I know what you mean...I have a corner too
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2 posted 2003-11-09 01:21 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) There is a corner in every room, and hopefully at least there is no crawlspace in its vicinity or thin walls! (sad sigh) This is wonderfully written, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-09-2003 01:22 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-11-09 02:33 PM


Just the idea of this made the reading worthwhile, let alone the striking execution. I like this very much.

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4 posted 2003-11-09 03:05 PM


somehow it filled my eyes with tears, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts!

Charisma

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5 posted 2003-11-09 07:37 PM


thank you, friends
for spending a moment

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6 posted 2003-11-12 11:03 PM


It's all in the knowing!
Lucky for you...Kacy~

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7 posted 2003-11-13 11:10 AM


thanks Lori
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8 posted 2003-11-17 12:25 PM


I enjoyed... and who could retaliate against someone who writes as you do??? lol


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