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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-11-09 10:28 AM



He never knew
all of you said
How much we loved
and now he's dead

Pain and regret
remorse and sorrow
too much too late
and no tomorrow

A family of phonies
a bunch of fakes
It makes me sick
too much to take

I'm glad i'm gone
and don't have to see
what you all say
how you feel of me



Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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1 posted 2003-11-09 12:53 PM


gawd! that's sad!
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2 posted 2003-11-09 01:07 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh KristieSue, this sounds so sad, dearest friend, my heart sends many angel hugs your way as you are deserving of so much more and I wish for comfort to come soon! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet KristieSue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-11-09 01:21 PM


This is so sad but a great write...Rita

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4 posted 2003-11-09 01:56 PM


Much emotion in this write.  I felt the sadness strongly.

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2003-11-09 06:43 PM


Brings tears to the eyes and a very
beautiful write.

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6 posted 2003-11-09 09:18 PM


Oh they're real all right....but remember, if you're not genuine, you can still be very real -- but real and false, and your own false perceptions will make you seem real to yourself. When that happens to a person, they never find a reason to change. Show 'em one, eh?

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7 posted 2003-11-10 08:55 AM


Thanks all...just get frustrated with phonies, especially in my own family.

Ratleader~I honestly don't care enough about any single one of them to do so...but you're right.

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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