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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

0 posted 2003-11-09 09:05 AM

In the Moment

Tucked ‘neath arched branches of late summer green,
Nestled hidden ‘tween autumn’s hues unseen.
‘Prisoned not by swelter of summer still
But in search of ‘morrow’s restless until.

In this moment, a swell sans ceded sigh,
As thoughts travail in chains of by and by.
Of prophecy willed by prisoner’s plea-
Summer’s shadow once cast shall set me free.

Yet, no freedom found with pendulum’s sway
As summer slumbers where Autumn now lay.
And shades I thought would be flaunted anew
Remain pale and mute in my autumn view.

For ‘twas not season that held prison’s key,
But moments not lived when moments must be.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-09 09:20 AM

I know a moth who is going to flutter
all over this - the

that it is...

I enjoyed the preview...
I am enjoying the final even more...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-11-09 09:25 AM

Beautiful and wise.
Love, Margherita

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-11-09 09:54 AM

This is very introspective, but darned if those old thoughts don't just follow you thru all the seasons. The little boogers just hang around, don't they. I hope you find the key soon. Angels

watch over you.

Love,
Terri~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-11-09 12:00 PM

Splendiforous!! Very good Patricia....you
are becoming quite adept at this....
Way to go!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-09 12:26 PM

awesome write Patricia! love the ending lines of wisdom!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-11-09 02:00 PM

(smiles) You always make prisms dance and carols be sung in every poetic moment you unfold, sweet friend, music is the universal language and in this moment you brought one natural symphony to life, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-11-09 02:24 PM

Beautifully done.....

.....and this

"For ‘twas not season that held prison’s key,
But moments not lived when moments must be."

is so very very true.....

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-11-09 02:30 PM

Patricia, very beautifully written. My
favorite lines were the ones Ed quoted also.

Hugs

Ethel

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

9 posted 2003-11-09 03:00 PM

I like this and specially the end

Smile

Jes

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-11-09 10:21 PM

Patricia~
This is such a beautiful piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-11-10 12:00 PM

I think I feel some new moments coming on...James

Varuch Elohim
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 41
Italy

12 posted 2003-11-10 01:55 AM

This is written beautifully.

Varuch Elohim

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