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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2003-11-09 02:14 AM


DOWN, DOWN, DOWN

Going round and round, down, down, down,
deeper, and deeper, into the ground
the root of life descends again
to move and shuffle all the rules.  
Not this way - that, where is the map,
and off I go to find the gold
without a knapsack on my back.

I thirst and hunger, long and pine,
and wish the journey not so long,
but then again the moon smiles down
and stars glitter in a brand new sky.

How mysterious the view I see
like when I’m dreaming just of you
but when the sun beats down to land
I know my hands aren’t made for two
and still must juggle them and they.

It’s off to school I go to learn
how still to love but not to yearn
but sleep, my refuge from the grief,
evades my brain like moonbeams play
beyond the length and breadth of me
and so I flip through pages fast.  

Flip!  Flip!  I guess I missed a part
and that must be the depth of heart
wherein resides the all there is
but it’s hard to grasp a moving part
that wiggles, jiggles, like a fool
on the stage of my short-sighted view.  

Dusty now my books grown old
for time has passed since then and when
I thought I was a child again
to learn and hold the essence, love,
above my head as my saviour.  

Still lie my arms close to my side
for the weight they carried then and when
has left an ache no one can mend
but beneath a brand new sky
leaves flutter on the trees, and move,
and change, and grow again,
while roots dig deeper down!
  

Helen / 9 November 2003  


© Copyright 2003 Helen - All Rights Reserved
pandonov
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1 posted 2003-11-09 02:58 AM


nice
Patricia
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2 posted 2003-11-09 07:14 AM


Flip!  Flip!  I guess I missed a part
and that must be the depth of heart
wherein resides the all there is
but it’s hard to grasp a moving part
that wiggles, jiggles, like a fool
on the stage of my short-sighted view.  

I can so relate to this.  There is something to be said for knowing the score before you play the game.  I think this realization hits you hard as you age.  Perhaps we grow too weary to grasp that wiggling, jiggling moving part.

Excellent write!

Patricia

Martie
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3 posted 2003-11-09 11:09 AM


hi Helen

"It’s off to school I go to learn
how still to love but not to yearn"

To know what you need to learn, is one of the biggest parts of the lesson.  Thank you for this Sunday Story.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-11-09 11:18 AM


Helen, I enjoyed this reading very much.  Thank you for sharing it.  
Someday, I hope I can hear you recite this.
I have a feeling your voice will bring the
bounce that I read within to life.


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5 posted 2003-11-09 02:40 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most wonderful write I'd love to hear you perform too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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6 posted 2003-11-09 03:54 PM


Thank you all so much for reading and for commenting.  I once did read a piece of mine to a full church congregation but the thing that seemed to move them the most was my son coming forward to help me off the stage and give me a kiss... and I sure needed that!  How strange it was to hear only my voice amongst so many people but it was an experience I won't forget.  
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