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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Darkness blankets me Wrapping me with loneliness Numbing all senses "Everybody's lost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
to me, the title is the most important part of a senryu, but this one does well on its own |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Liked this mucho! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I know where this came from, having read your Darkness poem. Well done! |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
Really loved this one. It reminds me of both being lonely and a warm comfy blanket. ~Angie~ |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Reaching out a hand to just squeeze when you need to. Or a hug to just get the feelings out. A hug  and a squeeze  Love, Terri~  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I can relate well to this numbening feeling, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah this I liked very much!! great senruy  Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amature2~ This is REALLY GOOD~ Deserves a title~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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