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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-11-08 08:34 PM



Upon the birth of a new moon, slipping from its veil
To redeem a rightful place, a clearer face as vespers trail
Considering the alter ego, all that is illusion bound
Coming out to be about and spin the yearns unwound

Such a simple precognition, as a pearl within to seek
Of a song that haunts the air, where quietness itself will speak
Unending in the patterns of together and alone
Bidding praise into the night blue, an amazing newborn tone

Shallow in the hallowed seas, to the surf on crested edge
Coming out to these degrees, letting go a certain pledge
Looking forward in the honor of immortal hymns in time
Thinking justly of eclipse, where views are changed in shadows mime

Copyright Kkh 11/08/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-11-08 08:39 PM


Beautiful K.  100 percent cloud cover here..
Not a chance....sheesh...

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-11-08 09:05 PM


Love this!  As I just replied to Karilea, my daughter has been hitting me with a ton of questions on this topic.  So, I am reading to her to poetic answers...How great is that!

Well done, TD!

Patricia

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3 posted 2003-11-09 12:23 PM


yes!
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4 posted 2003-11-09 12:27 PM


Kathleen~
This is totally gorgeous~

'Thinking justly of eclipse, where views are changed in shadows mime'

What a beautiful thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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5 posted 2003-11-09 01:16 AM


"Such a simple precognition, as a pearl within to seek
Of a song that haunts the air, where quietness itself will speak"

I loved the line Marge quoted as well--

stellar--and once again I count on you to set a positively mellow mood for my "night wanderings".


Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-11-09 09:22 AM


Karen stole my favorite lines...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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7 posted 2003-11-09 03:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and through the emergence of the moon may you find an afterglow that never wanes! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie
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8 posted 2003-11-09 03:06 PM


TD...Amazing!
Jes
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9 posted 2003-11-09 03:09 PM


What a moon can do --- what a moon can do....

Smile i like this

Jes


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