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froggy
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0 posted 2003-11-08 08:01 PM



If I reached out my hand
Would you take hold?

If I were cold
Would you give me warmth?

If I was hurt
Would you comfort me?

If I said I loved you
Would you hate me?


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Jes
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1 posted 2003-11-08 08:07 PM


There are many hidden feelings and tellings in this, as i read it there is a long tsory that has been told between the lines.

Smile

But i wouldnt think taht anyone could hate, because they got to know that they are loved.

Smile again

Jes


SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-11-08 11:46 PM


Seems like a searching for the real truth about how someone feels about you. I hope it's all you are hoping for.
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-09 12:13 PM


sometimes things are better left alone...but whatdoIknow?
Siofra
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4 posted 2003-11-09 03:03 AM


sometimes these things are all we need to know, right?

enjoyed the thoughts this gave me.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

ice
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5 posted 2003-11-09 08:14 AM


yes, yes, yes, and no


Sadelite
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6 posted 2003-11-09 08:31 AM


It amazes me how your four questions can conjure up brain hidden images so quickly.
The power of questioning is the ultimate...
   I've enjoyed all of your posts that I just happened upon.  I'm looking forward to reading more.
                          Sadie

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-11-09 08:36 AM


hmmmmmmm....the last lines made me suck in my breath...because I lived that episode..

Very good piece, Froggy Girl!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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8 posted 2003-11-09 03:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I sure hope good fortune comes your way this time around, sweet friend, may you ask and may he respond with truth and heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

froggy
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9 posted 2003-11-09 03:38 PM


Thank-you all for the wonderful comments.

When one seeks the answer.... Its often found within the question.

:-)

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