" Her eyes told my story "

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Jes
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since 2003-10-21

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Denmark

0 posted 2003-11-08 06:33 PM

We were out ----- and nothing should be

But out of the crowd ----- How should we go free

We danced like if we were alone ----- Her touch on my skin.

I felt her al through my bone ----- She and i could now begin.

To become one in thoughts ----- I looked in her eyes.

We were no longer two sorts ----- After this i inside cries.

Her deep brown eyes ----- She was thinking.

She could never tell lies ----- From today our world was shrinking.

Soon we will meet ----- But cannot talk

Though there is alot to exeed ----- Im still looking to were we can walk.

But i know this was not only a single night, that i saw her in the light so bright with such delight.

Untill time comes i will remember her brown deep eyes.

Smile

Jes

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2003-11-08 06:48 PM

The times are ripe.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-08 06:52 PM

Jes~
Such lovely sentiments~
Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Jes
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Denmark

3 posted 2003-11-08 06:59 PM

Thanks Margherita for reading " smile " and happy to see you enjoyed.

Thank you too Marge, isnt it just one of the things about poetry that we need to share.

Smile

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (11-08-2003 07:00 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2003-11-09 01:30 AM

remembering is important

Jes
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Denmark

5 posted 2003-11-09 04:26 AM

Smile sure it is Passing, but there is something over it when you can look all the way through the eyes and deep down to find the pretty litle heart that we have inside.

Smile she had it, and still has.

Jes

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

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6 posted 2003-11-09 07:29 AM

Just lovely, Jes.

Patricia

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-11-09 08:41 AM

Nice!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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8 posted 2003-11-09 08:52 AM

Jes,
   For some reason or other, I couldn't help but play with the format in which this was written.   First, I read the whole poem, then just left of the dash, then just right, and so on.   Every way I tried it, I liked it.
   "She could never tell lies ----- From today our world was shrinking"  I can see where it would, but I can see an opposite as well.
    Enjoyed.  Thank you for sharing.
                             Sadelite

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-11-09 08:57 AM

This is so sweet. These words seem so dear to your heart. How lovely is that! Beautiful to read!
Love,
Terri~

Jes
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Denmark

10 posted 2003-11-09 02:54 PM

Patricia

Smile thanks for ya thoughts Patricia.

Susan Caldwell

Thanks Susan, smile

Sadelite

There is an opposite but should i tell or not better not smile cause i think it would put my words in dark thoughts. If i told about everything behind smile.

But i actually read it through several times after your post cause i havent seen all teh ways it could be read as i made it, but yes its true to the story or better her in each way. Thanks for ya time. smile

SharaRose

She was a pretty taht night and she still is i just hope i can stand what it takes. Smile and yes it means alot to mee cause in those eyes what i saw.......

Smile

Thanks all

Hugs

Jes

Mistletoe Angel

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11 posted 2003-11-09 03:15 PM

(smiles) Oh Jes, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your wonderful words do that express such deep feelings! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jes, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Jes
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Denmark

12 posted 2003-11-09 03:21 PM

Thanks and smiles back Noah

Hugs sendet too

Smile

Jes

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