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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-11-08 06:12 PM





Fill me


Patience eludes me.
I look for you
everywhere
and listen to every
tiny sound.
I thirst for you.
I am a dry lake
burning in midday heat.
Answer my song
of desire!
Come to me!
Flow into me,
river of Love,
jumping down joyously
from the Source.
Satiate my yearning heart.
Fill my emptiness
and allow me to be
your mirror.
Pour your light
into my eyes
so that I may shine
as One with you.

Out of the vastness
of silence
a secret tune is born
and moves towards me.
In delirious pleasure
I receive you.
Here, now,
I keep you within
and I thirst no more.
You have watered
my garden
and I blossom
in delight.
I touch the Sun
and glisten in its light.
All anxiety is gone.
Now,
that you have come.


© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Magic Solias
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1 posted 2003-11-08 06:22 PM


Pure like a fresh spring in the high mountains.  Sounds like true love to me.  Also a very nice picture, goes really good with the text.

"mystery is beauty"


Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-11-08 06:33 PM


Wow,  this could very well be a very passionate poem to a lover....for the words
can go either way....  Loved this,  excellently composed...

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-08 07:13 PM


Margherita~
Now just how lovely is this ?
Very !
Your thoughts flow effortlessly to bring such beauty to us~
Thank you dear friend for sharing such word-thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-11-08 07:18 PM


Beautiful this is! Warm, and loving.
Love,
Terri~

Jes
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5 posted 2003-11-08 07:27 PM


That one described in those words is a lucky one, cause true love can only come with a caring heart, this is it.

Smile

Jes


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-11-08 07:40 PM


A beautiful flow...James
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7 posted 2003-11-08 08:01 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo enchanting, sweet friend, yay! (does happy dance) I love it, sweet friend, and may nymphs and faeries forever flitter in your happy garden of your heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2003-11-08 08:38 PM


Hi Margherita ... WOW! This is an amazing write filled with such hot passion.

Nice to be here again to read your poems. This one is exceptional.

Hugs, Marti


passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-09 12:08 PM


this is SO gorgeous!
Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-11-09 09:15 AM


Thank you my dear poet friends for your warmth.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Patricia
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11 posted 2003-11-09 10:19 AM


This absolutely wonderful.  Beautiful images wrapped in a tender plea.  

Patricia

Martie
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12 posted 2003-11-09 10:22 AM


Your poem is filled with passion and beauty!  Much enjoyed!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
13 posted 2003-11-09 10:27 AM


I'm so glad this was brought back to the top.  Thank you for your lovely, lovely words.  And the waterfall?  I personally know how lovely they can be...
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