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White Winter Icicle Castle Of Dreams (Picture Poem)

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

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For GR

White, soft, diamond snow glistening upon the
new morn,
Dim sun rays beam through the new magical
snowflakes born,

Magical, white, bright, beautiful as our love
tis beauty to behold, tiny pieces of love, falling,

Gently falling down upon the cold frozen
barren ground,
Your love falls ever so gently into my heart
without a sound,

Like snowflakes falling, each designed piece,
each unique part,
every piece of you softly melts into my
vermilion heart,

Come my ancient love,into thy winter white icicle
castle of dreams,
run and laugh with me, tickle me, for you I
would capture the suns golden beams,

Within my gentle hands, I would bestow the beams into your beating, loving heart,
keeping you warm, aglow with happiness,all the love
in the universe, I do impart,

Sweet soul of mine, clasp thy hands into mine,
feel my love, look into my deep loving eyes,
be drunk unto thy love as sweet wine,

Outside our winter castle, kiss thy red velvet lips a thousand times,
As the snow softly, tenderly falls upon our face, passionately kiss me my love,warm is thy embrace,

Embraced my velvet heart you have, captured I am now your Queen, but loves slave,
scarlet cloak of red vermilion adorns my body,
opend for your love , your arms to embrace me,

Cold is my body, but warm is thy love, frosty breath kisses, loves fire,
heating my soul, flowing throughout my body,
filling my head to my toes with unquenchable desire,

Let us feast upon our love, starved my heart has hungered,for just one taste of your kiss,
A thousand days, nights, dreams have I longed for this one moment of loves awaited bliss,

With ferved passion, all the woman I am, I give unto to you, my love, my heart, my soul,
You have ways of moving me, loving me,
making me loose control,

With latern in hand, through the snowy light,
mount up the horse and sleigh,
lets have a romantic sleigh ride tonight,

Romantic love we will share through this sleigh ride underneath the snow coverd trees,
trees of powdered sugar delight,

Moons glow upon the bright featherly snow,
shinning from the dark velvet blue skies,
my heart does know, it is you,my love belongs, it is you I love forever, as I peer deep into your crystal blue loving eyes,

A lovers dream I feel I am in, never awaken me from this beautiful slumber,
Come my love, live with me forever and ever, let us live as one together, our love keeping us warm, throughout cold winters yet to encumber,

After our night of love, we reside into our winter castle, me laying enfolded inside your arms, in front of the warm glow of the fireplace beaming upon your face,

Laying with you peacefully, as the snow falls, cascading outside the castle window,
my heart can rest, i am loved, happy and blessed, as two loves doves inside their nest,

In all the days of my life, peacefully i can die knowing i was loved by you,
Your love is my life,and even though i would die, our love would live on, reborn every night like the dew,

On days of winters falling snow, my mind escapes to where I long to go,
Where you and I love the world away, all through the tomorrows, todays, memories I long to redeem,

Forever love, forever free, liveing, loving, within our white castle icicle dreams.....

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-13-2004 07:09 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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A Romantic Heart
Surely a romantic heart,lovely write.
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Listening to every heart

2 posted 11-08-2003 10:40 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A Dr. Zhivago write...
enjoyed this, very much.
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City of Roses

3 posted 11-08-2003 11:49 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love the dazzling imagery and passion put into this write, sweet friend, this is just gorgeous along with the painting, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-08-2003 11:50 AM).]

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4 posted 11-08-2003 12:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BIG *SIGH* at the beauty of this~
Perfectly penned loving thoughts~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram   

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very sensual writing here ladyfriend
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6 posted 11-13-2003 04:24 AM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goldenrose

My love...this is a fantasticaly, brilliant poem of possitvely drips with romantic passion....and love so strong....for this i am humbled by your encompasing love for me..touched by your generous words for me....proud to be the person who loves you....this is your best keep on bettering your best poems...thank you my love.....

Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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7 posted 06-13-2004 02:44 PM       View Profile for Snow   Email Snow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Snow's Home Page   View IP for Snow

the avisse painting IS a lovely one... and he's one of my favorite artist. but i have permission from him to use his work ....

also you're linking directly from my site, please don't do that. i pay a huge amount every month for my bandwidth.
thank you.


"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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