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One day... Two Moons (For Marge T)
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One day... Two Moons (For Marge T) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Two moons in earthen glow silhouetting lovers dancing the ball, revolving slow Lost to the moment as a band plays on Eyes that gleam of the candle’s light taking a step in time touching so slight two moons [This message has been edited by Magnus (11-07-2003 11:32 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well now, barry /very..you are making such a pretty here...love it(though I'm not MT) I know she will too!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge got tired of me saying "one day I will" .... so, under duress (yeah, right) I did it!!! (a rictameter) But....one day....nahhhh, won't happen... Thanx dear one... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Okay sweetie ... ya' get an E for effort And a smile  to help you suffer the duress ???Now ... check your email for the teacher's red pencil~  AND ... the next 'one day' is gonna be the circled moon thingie, right ? Yeah ... it'll happen~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
A  ~ Nighty night *Huglets*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You truly have the magic of the moon in you, sweet friend, if this made your love's cheeks blush with a smile of joy then you have done your job, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are an inspiration, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Beautiful, Barry. I have been gone too long...missed your words. Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, that's lovely! I have just gazed at the moon .... my, it's beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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