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Open Poetry #29

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mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-11-07 05:28 PM

i tried to write a poem,
but it was pure crap.
all my poems are feeling forced
im tring to put myself on the map.
i just want something profound
to befall this mocking page.
but the cursor just blinks,
i think im going to die this way.

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-11-07 05:35 PM

it will come when it is supposed to, don't force it, that is the worst....just stay "open"

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2003-11-08 01:31 AM

I know what ya mean.  My word never comes out the way I picture things--unless I'm raving mad and then, too much comes out!   Good luck to you.
                      Sadelite
(Well, something must have come out because we understand the point you were making!)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-11-08 03:22 AM

(sigh) I agree with everything Susan has said, sweet Rachael, the best poetry comes out honest and right from the heart, so let it come out organically rather than force writing a poem a day! (big hugggsssssss) Your muse will grace you as always, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rachael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-08 03:25 AM

I know whatcha mean

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2003-11-08 04:03 AM

I understand completely... although some may think my view a bit crass.... come see mine for your answer.... good one!!!

Sherry

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (11-08-2003 04:06 AM).]

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