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As I Waited For The Storm
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As I Waited For The Storm |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Jim Warren * * * The wind swept along the cliffs As white caps filled the raging sea I could hear the beast within Trying desperately to break free From the comfort of my car I watched the seagulls try to fly The wind was unforgiving As storm clouds filled the sky Nature's show was so spectacular It was the greatest show on earth As the sky became more ominous To the rain the clouds gave birth I sat and drank my coffee I was comfortable and warm Watching from my front row seat I sat waiting for the storm I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Not only is the painting breathtaking ... you have word-etched it beautifully~ This is REALLY PRETTY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The wind swept along the cliffs As white caps filled the raging sea I could hear the beast within Trying desperately to break free" loved this image....  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful Sue.. the words and picture...perfect! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, this is so beautiful. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I really liked this. It was very easy to visualize. I would say that it had a nice flow to it, but I suppose that might not be "too appropriate," as the beast raged and the waters were pretty rough! Nice write. Sadelite |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, I just discovered what Santa does in his spare time, enjoy the beach and feed all the seagulls and creatures of the sea! (kiss on cheek) I love ocean storms and can't wait to move to Portland, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how gorgeous! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Oh, that is so cool!..I've done that before... I love a good storm... lightning, thunder.... Hail even... I would sit on my porch and watch it surround me with such energy. I enjoyed the trip back into a memory this poem provided me.... Excellent view.... fantastic write!!! Sherry |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is really pretty... the poem as well as the picture.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Last week I stopped at this place to drink my coffee and felt inspired to write about what I was seeing. I didn't have my notebook with me so I had to resort to writing on the cardboard carton my McDonald's coffee came in but I was so glad I wrote it down. Thank you all for your fabulous comments. Noah - thank you so much for the wonderful picture - I love it! Take care........Sue |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: This is a wonderful write and the picture really compliments it! I love the sea in all her moods and could really relate to this. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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