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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Here, midnight in November, is the bitter aroma of the wind, reminding me of my skin still being intact. Watching as the leaves drown in riverbeds of ice.. Now I wish my dreams begone. November snow, cannot even save that which has already passed.. There are no words to describe the taste of the air, though it's made a home in my lungs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Meghan, driving in this morning, a few thoughts slipped in, and I wondered when best to share them. Adding them to your post, for you, then, as I believe you would enjoy them most. frost on a November morn, he left her that cold |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
@#$% novembers |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) January is when the air can really get hard for me, as November can have that thick vortex of blizzardesque emotion! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"Here, midnight in November, is the bitter aroma of the wind, reminding me of my skin still being intact." this made me want to strip the skin from the rest of the words..and see underneath the workings of the mind that wrote it..to feel the intake of air and taste myself the November you speak of... you do that... you take the reader into the essence of the feeling and leave them wanting to violently understand... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
at least u have a November, here i'm dying in sun  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Always fantastic imagery in your work Kaoru. Enjoyed. Maree  fate is not just |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
ah, sweet november...sweet subtle november i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
I've never quite been able to appreciate the depressing nature that November seems to stir in some. I find it stimulating. Enjoyed the poem. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i love the cold are in my lungs makes me feel as if i am alive "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I miss the darkness that is October. What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Exactly what Ron (Cpat) said, that is it exactly....he put my thoughts into words...all of your poems are like that....so cool... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this...hard |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
such wonder of light blue beauty sprinkled with shiny stars is your poem, illuminating dark catacombs of unknown unknown, bathing in its sparkling starlight, I am. |
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