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darkatnoon
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0 posted 2003-11-07 12:50 PM



where silence deafens groans,
strings strangle peace
and thousands of echoes twist,
mind is resting...



© Copyright 2003 Janina Peteva - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-07 12:51 PM


wow! nice imagery, and true

Welcome to Passions!

Looking forward to more of your writingss

Greeneyes
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2 posted 2003-11-07 12:59 PM




Interesting first post.....I hope you enjoy your stay here....

Greeneyes~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-11-07 01:00 PM


wonderfully done
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-11-07 01:08 PM



An awesome [and we don't use that word around here much] first post!  I am truly looking forward to your offerings.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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5 posted 2003-11-07 01:10 PM


that was great!  Welcome to Passions! :-)

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-07 01:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Janina, this is a most wonderful and direct debut, sweet friend, you sure convert silence to serenity, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Janina, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Janina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
7 posted 2003-11-07 02:49 PM


hei this is my little sister.i finally bribed her to join the PIP
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-11-07 02:59 PM


darkatnoon
Welcome and an interesting write.

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9 posted 2003-11-07 03:01 PM


sparse use of words to create strong images is indeed an art... one I enjoy..

look forward to seeing more from your pen...

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10 posted 2003-11-07 03:04 PM


This has the feel of eastern form poetry--and if it IS, forgive my ignorance. I'm not up on that stuff.

Welcome to Pip! We bark but don't bite.

(okay I bite a little, but only by invitation!)


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11 posted 2003-11-07 03:26 PM


Welcome! *S* I'm glad you joined... liked very much both this and your collaboration with your brother. *S*
SEA
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with you
12 posted 2003-11-07 05:03 PM


yep, a very cool write welcome
and no, Sunshine does not use awesome lol at least not that I have ever seen....so she must really like it!

wandering glider
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aloft
13 posted 2003-11-07 05:07 PM


A puzzlement, for sure.
mytuesdaywishes
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a voice from the musicbox
14 posted 2003-11-07 05:14 PM


ah, nice...

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

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15 posted 2003-11-07 05:18 PM


Janina~
Welcome to Passions circle of poets and friends~
An enjoyable read ... pull up a chair and make yourself cozy ... we've got lots of talented people here to share the circle with you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

Enchantress
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16 posted 2003-11-07 06:22 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your first post..
I look forward to seeing your name here more often.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

ThisDiamond
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17 posted 2003-11-07 06:42 PM


Welcome to Passions. So nice to read you.
A very talented entrance. ThisDiamond

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
18 posted 2003-11-07 08:59 PM


Well done, and Welcome.
Temptress
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19 posted 2003-11-08 03:32 AM


Welcome to Passions.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


darkatnoon
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20 posted 2003-11-08 06:16 AM


Wow,what a start!thank you everyone!
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