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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-07 11:38 AM



Between the Chimes


Closed her eyes in the pale of the moon,
a touch of view replacing the need.
Waltzed to rhythms in shadow's glow
on words of "once before" to feed.

The bell tolls more in days gone by
listening to "between the chimes."
Searching for that sometimes dream,
where heart, his, listens to words in rhyme.

It all leads back to him in thought,
vanilla warmth, and tree strong limbed.
She'll love him even when it's gone,
when sleep invades and lights are dimmed.

Always and ever, forever words weigh.
Time moves on, but the memories stay.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-11-07 11:41 AM


How perfectly moving this was, promoting a forever illumination to love which goes on forever....very pretty write my friend, you've got tears in my eyes.....

Love to you


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2 posted 2003-11-07 12:28 PM


don't they though...forever and ever and ever...
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3 posted 2003-11-07 12:45 PM


Wynter~

'Always and ever, forever words weigh.
Time moves on, but the memories stay.'


*sigh* ... my heart mirrors yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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4 posted 2003-11-07 02:28 PM


I love this, maureen. I have a thing about silences between sounds, and how they reverberate more meaning to me than the words or notes sounding.

Thoroughly enjoyed m'friend.

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5 posted 2003-11-08 03:34 AM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too believe between every single tone...every single voice...there is another whisper...sometimes inaudible...that holds the true beauty within the symphonies of life! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, listen with your heart always and find peace be with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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