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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-11-07 11:36 AM

Zephyr winds shall blow
as sure as cerulean skies will beckon
while somewhere in sea’s spray
my name awaits its draw in sand

for I will mark this place of time
a passage from this here to there
placing my face into unhurried breezes
hearing some echo in my bones

in close of eyes I shall feel close tepid
air fingering its prints on my skin
as freckles blossom under a sun
knowing some echoes will thunder

steps, retraced, in a past remembering
me, as I discover it again
the child in search of all unknowns ~
with a zeal, in wait, of life.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-11-07 11:37 AM

mmmm.....sighing....this is so soft and lovely....I LOVE IT!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-11-07 11:38 AM

life has it's way with us, doesn't it? Exceptional soft lullaby. Very much enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-07 12:16 PM

"while somewhere in sea’s spray
my name awaits its draw in sand

~*~*~*~

for I will mark this place of time
a passage from this here to there"

and...

"steps, retraced, in a past remembering
me, as I discover it again
the child in search of all unknowns ~
with a zeal, in wait, of life."

Yes...I know...and understand.
Beautifully expressed sunny lady.
Hugs~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-11-07 12:27 PM

Zephyr winds shall blow
as sure as cerulean skies will beckon
while somewhere in sea’s spray
my name awaits its draw in sand

for I will mark this place of time
a passage from this here to there
placing my face into unhurried breezes
hearing some echo in my bones

in close of eyes I shall feel close tepid
air fingering its prints on my skin
as freckles blossom under a sun
knowing some echoes will thunder

===============================

oh my oh my oh my................

IWIHWT!!!!!!

write my heart why dont ya.

Exquisite write Kari.

sheeeesh...whats in your tea these days...
your muse is on high girl!!

Send the mute moth some of what ever it is!

Words break into splinters on the pages I write
If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ...
Burn forever where the flame turns blue

David Gray

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-11-07 12:29 PM

for I will mark this place of time
a passage from this here to there....''''

sigh...awww Karilea ya got me with this one....it's all good...
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-07 12:31 PM

I get tired of waiting on life...but you make it sound not-so-bad

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-11-07 01:43 PM

This is most beautiful

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-11-07 02:26 PM

steps, retraced, in a past remembering
me, as I discover it again
the child in search of all unknowns ~
with a zeal, in wait, of life.

Oh my goodness, yes, Kari.....

We should expect good things
to happen in the unknown....with the zeal
of a child!! We would have so much more happiness!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-11-07 02:27 PM

(smiles) Yay! Keep on stridin', dearest friend, for that little girl in your heart will always be singing with zeal for life and youth, truth and knowledge, hehehe, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2003-11-07 02:44 PM

Her hands,  small against the pane
looking into the future beyond
Wondering,  waiting.

And as she grows...lightly touching the
pane of many prints...smiling,  knowing,
yet still searching.

Beautifully written,  Sun....

I always enjoy you taking us places...

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-11-07 03:42 PM

Hmmm this is so calming and I can feel the tease of the Zephyr breeze.

Most wonderful Sunshinygirl

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

12 posted 2003-11-08 02:13 AM

Sunshine,
This has become my favorite of yours--it's so calming and unhurried.
Sadelite

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2003-11-09 11:46 PM

Enjoyed...James

Varuch Elohim
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since 2003-11-10

Posts 41
Italy

14 posted 2003-11-10 02:02 AM

Beautiful work and beautiful baby.

Enjoyed
Varuch Elohim

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