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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-11-07 11:26 AM


I feel a little lonely
A litte lost without you
I wonder how you've been
So far away from me
I fell a little quickly
Too quickly for my taste
But you're mine now
And for always may it be
So long as you come back to me
Don't kose yourself out there
Don't give up on life
Please don't forget me
Live for me, breathe with me
Come back into my arms
I sometimes wonder
If you can keep the promise
that you so easily made to me
Can you really stay alive
When so many will be determined
That you die?
And will you truly
Come to me so I can hold you close?
And will you always be mine alone?
I miss your voice
It's been so long
And still so long 'til we can meet
Oh you are a fool idiot boy who has entranced me
A kind and caring man who has stole my heart
You are my marine and mine alone
But, Lord, do I miss you so

I only know myself...and even that I don't know well.

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-07 11:35 AM


lovely sentiments...well written with an overwhelming allowance voiced....acceptance...showing your giving side

Very good sentiments....and wishing you both, a friendship going way beyond what ever you conceive...which will bond and mold you forever.  


mytuesdaywishes
Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
2 posted 2003-11-07 05:07 PM


awwww....so close to the heart, much love

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

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