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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-11-07 08:47 AM


you seem to be
slashing your shadows again
scything like an editor
playing Mortal Kombat
on a hack writing poetry
sword on words

let them remain in stay

for then some laggard
can benchmark your footprints
and traverse the mystery
that some have labelled life

or someone front runner
can see you reaching out
almost touching in approach
and gather pace again

after all, the way shadows fall
and who touches your shadows
depends on where the sun is:
face to face or supporting from back

if the sun be in shine

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (11-07-2003 08:50 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-07 08:48 AM


  

Seek, and ye shall find....

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2 posted 2003-11-07 02:51 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Without the shadows, we are forever in elementary, rudimentary class, as though we shouldn't get absorbed in the shadows and think of them all the time, we must visit them like we visit nursing homes and be educated with them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2003-11-10 04:28 AM


thanks a lot... for the shine and the kindness dear friends...

regards
sudhir

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