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ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India

0 posted 2003-11-07 03:26 AM


In your eyes,
I can see,
My dreams,
Realising.

In your heart,
I can see,
myself,
residing.

© Copyright 2003 Ambrish Parihar - All Rights Reserved
PouringJewels
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since 2003-09-18
Posts 158
Maryland
1 posted 2003-11-07 03:35 AM


Little by little, I'm loosing you I can see.
Bit by bit, your love is slipping away from me. This is what I read in this write. Am I right?

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
2 posted 2003-11-07 03:43 AM


My heart in two pieces melt together as one smile.

True love goes to the heart and eyes with a glimt.

I liked it smile.

Jes

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-07 04:14 AM


oh....this is a beauty!
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2003-11-07 08:01 AM


The unusual punctuation makes this poem distinct..as well as the arrangement of very short lines, that make clear, the messege..
Enjoyed the read....ice


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-11-07 08:06 AM


I see a beatufiul wish and dream come true and promise of a great future for the both of you.  Lovely write

Good Morning

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2003-11-07 08:11 AM


ambrish,


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-11-08 06:50 PM


A silky jewel...one of my favorites...James
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