»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #29
»
Meeting eye to eye
| Open Poetry #29 |
|
Meeting eye to eye |
|
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
|
Rain divides them, along telephone lines they sit,like bowling pins ready to topple. They are background music to the theme of life and death below. Detached as monks, morphing into the days' malaise, until they storm the sky, descending as they remind me to look up. We meet eyes somewhere in the middle. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-06-2003 10:41 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mish one of your best or at least one of my favs |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkedGoddess~ Your poetry has a way of making me look at things in a different light~ Greatly enjoyed the imagery~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
||
|
PassionandFun Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60 |
well i hope its love as their eyes meet.... |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I keep enjoying your wondrous and heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, meetying eye to eye can reveal so much mystery to one another that feels so tangible, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  Nay love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one of my favorites too! |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
meeting I-to-I eye2eye ...most enjoyed... regards sudhir |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful....could actually picture a big movie screen and felt tears of joy while watching the beginning to the end of a great movie/love story Could this be continued? Hiya and happy friday  |
||
|
bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Heartfelt...from a brooklynboy to a brooklyn gurl........love your stuff |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cointenly (a slang form)...there will be an encore to this....Yes? |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 into my library this flies! more, please |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
"Blackbird fly . . blackbird fly . . ." *smile* nice imagery Michele reminded me kinda of Hitchcock's "The Birds" for a sec there  xxoo |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
