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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-06 01:06 PM


I
down to fall,
the fall of my reduction,
the reduction to  self,
the self incised to
I


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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-11-06 01:30 PM


Heh, this is awesome.. as with everything you write.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-11-06 11:13 PM


bump..
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2003-11-07 01:44 AM


ooh I like.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-11-07 01:48 AM


...the wheels on the bus go round and round
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-11-07 01:50 AM


I, I, captain! ~ The I's have it!


EA


serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-11-07 02:16 PM


ah..this reminded me of the self introspect and discovery of ego, id and ta-da!

superego.

That's alot of thinking provoked with a few words.

Well done.

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