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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-06 12:56 PM



Tailored made
To make you happy
Just the right time
When the tear
Starts to fall
Bringing a smile
When the darkness
Surrounds
And you're all alone
Words scattered on a page
Infused with enough passion
For everyone's interpretation
And the world is a little brighter
Knowing it was written
Just for them
Even though we know
They were meant for you.
As a little smile tiptoes
Across your lips
And you seem not to mind
The darkness anymore
As happy tears start to flow.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-11-06 01:00 PM


Dan, I am keeping this one and there is nothing you can do about it!!!!

This is going on my desktop to cheer me up when I need it...

  Thank you (I know it wasn't to me but heck, I can still pretend).

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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2 posted 2003-11-06 01:03 PM


thank you! I know you wrote this for me, LOL, so it's going to stay in my personal library.
you sweetie, you!

pandonov
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3 posted 2003-11-06 01:04 PM


really cool
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-11-06 01:09 PM


Now I really know this one is for me...right??
Beautiful indeed!
hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-11-06 01:13 PM


Well, attitude will get you everywhere!
good read Brad..thank you, I swear you look just like an ol friend of mine...Dennis...do you know you have a twin?

Brad Majors
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6 posted 2003-11-06 01:49 PM


thank you all. Susan you never know
jellybeans
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7 posted 2003-11-06 01:58 PM


*smiling* yep this one reads personal to each and every one who reads...now that is a gift, to both the writer and the reader
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8 posted 2003-11-06 02:33 PM


I was just thinking the same thing as Lee, you sure do look familiar to me also.  Must be a Pennsylvania thing huh?  lol.  This is very well written and each reader is sure to think it is about "just them".  Very well done.
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9 posted 2003-11-06 03:27 PM


when your as old as me, everyone begins to look familar.....hehehehhehehe
Denny is from New Jersey, boy could he write music!  Just like you Brad....

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10 posted 2003-11-06 04:53 PM


huh?  did someone say PA? :-)  We should have a PA/NJ/NY get-together :-)

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2003-11-06 04:54 PM


Hey, now I want to go!!!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Brad Majors
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12 posted 2003-11-07 07:56 AM


hey what about GA?
Susan Caldwell
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13 posted 2003-11-07 08:49 AM


Ok, I have always wanted to go to N.O. so we can all meet there and crash Karen's place!!!!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

LeeJ
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14 posted 2003-11-07 09:37 AM


That sounds like a plan to me, a PA/NJ Get togeter would be right up there with Dairy Queen Blizzards!!!  You name the place and time...

Hey Brad, my son is a police officer in Atlanta!!!


Brad Majors
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15 posted 2003-11-07 09:43 AM


cool. I'm in Augusta but Atlanta isn't too far
Aenimal
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16 posted 2003-11-07 09:53 AM


Awesome Brad nice to see your words again
LeeJ
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17 posted 2003-11-07 10:13 AM


Hi Again, Brad, I'll be in GA over Thanksgiving...if you'd like to get together, perhaps we can arrange coffee somewhere, bring your wife/girl and lets chat over some java...think about it and let me know.  

I'd be pleased to meet you.  

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